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A Compound Complex Sentence

Sentences: Simple, Compound, and Complex

Experienced writers use a variety of sentences to make their writing interesting and lively. Too many simple sentences, for example, will sound choppy and immature while too many long sentences will be difficult to read and hard to understand.
This page contains definitions of simple, compound, and complex sentences with many simple examples. The purpose of these examples is to help the ESL/EFL learner to identify sentence basics including identification of sentences in the short quizzes that follow. After that, it will be possible to analyze more complex sentence varieties.

Simple Sentence

A simple sentence, also called an independent clause, contains a subject and a verb, and it expresses a complete thought. In the following simple sentences, subjects are in yellow, and verbs are in green.
  1. Some students like to study in the mornings.
  2. Juan and Arturo play football every afternoon.
  3. Alicia goes to the library and studies every day.
The three examples above are all simple sentences. Note that sentence 2 contains a compound subject, and sentence 3 contains a compound verb. Simple sentences, therefore, contain a subject and verb and express a complete thought, but they can also contain compound subjects or verbs.

Compound Sentence

A compound sentence contains two independent clauses joined by a coordinator. The coordinators are as follows: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so. (Helpful hint: The first letter of each of the coordinators spells FANBOYS.) Except for very short sentences, coordinators are always preceded by a comma. In the following compound sentences, subjects are in yellow, verbs are in green, and the coordinators and the commas that precede them are in red.
  1. I tried to speak Spanish, and my friend tried to speak English.
  2. Alejandro played football, so Maria went shopping.
  3. Alejandro played football, for Maria went shopping.
The above three sentences are compound sentences. Each sentence contains two independent clauses, and they are joined by a coordinator with a comma preceding it. Note how the conscious use of coordinators can change the meaningof the sentences. Sentences 2 and 3, for example, are identical except for the coordinators. In sentence 2, which action occurred first? Obviously, "Alejandro played football" first, and as a consequence, "Maria went shopping." In sentence 3, "Maria went shopping" first. In sentence 3, "Alejandro played football" because, possibly, he didn't have anything else to do, for or because "Maria went shopping." How can the use of other coordinators change the relationship between the two clauses? What implications would the use of "yet" or "but" have on the meaning of the sentence?

Complex Sentence


  1. When he handed in his homework, he forgot to give the teacher the last page.
  2. The teacher returned the homework after she noticed the error.
  3. The students are studying because they have a test tomorrow.
  4. After they finished studying, Juan and Maria went to the movies
  5. Juan and Maria went to the movies after they finished studying.
A complex sentence has an independent clause joined by one or more dependent clauses. A complex sentence always has a subordinator such as becausesince,afteralthough, or when (and many others) or a relative pronoun such as thatwho, or which. In the following complex sentences, subjects are in yellow, verbs are in green, and the subordinators and their commas (when required) are in red.
When a complex sentence begins with a subordinator such as sentences 1 and 4, a comma is required at the end of the dependent clause. When the independent clause begins the sentence with subordinators in the middle as in sentences 2, 3, and 5, no comma is required. If a comma is placed before the subordinators in sentences 2, 3, and 5, it is wrong.
Note that sentences 4 and 5 are the same except sentence 4 begins with the dependent clause which is followed by a comma, and sentence 5 begins with the independent clause which contains no comma. The comma after the dependent clause in sentence 4 is required, and experienced listeners of English will often hear a slight pause there. In sentence 5, however, there will be no pause when the independent clause begins the sentence.

Complex Sentences / Adjective Clauses

Finally, sentences containing adjective clauses (or dependent clauses) are also complex because they contain an independent clause and a dependent clause. The subjects, verbs, and subordinators are marked the same as in the previous sentences, and in these sentences, the independent clauses are also underlined.
  1. The woman who called my mom sells cosmetics.
  2. The book that Jonathan read is on the shelf.
  3. The house which Abraham Lincoln was born in is still standing.
  4. The town where I grew up is in the United States.

Parallelism


Parallelism
Attention--Non-native speakers of English: Martha Ruszkowski has kindly made a Belorussian translation of the material below available for your use.
To get across ideas of equal value or to create snazzy sentences, use parallel sentence structure. Good sentences attempt to form parallel patterns. Without this parallel structure, they can sound stilted and awkward. For instance, which sentence sounds better below?
 
(1) King Alfred tried to make the law clear, precise, and equitable.
(2) King Alfred tried to make clear laws that had precision and were equitable.
Most people would argue that the first sentence somehow "sounds better" than the second. The first sentence uses parallel structure in its adjectives. The second doesn't. If we label the parts of speech, the first sentence has this grammatical structure after the word law[Adjective--Adjective--Adjective]The second sentence has this grammatical structure after the word laws[Relative Pronoun--Verb-- Direct Object--Conjunction--Verb--Adjective]. The first sentence has a clear pattern of adjective, adjective, adjective. The second sentence has no pattern at all!
To hear the difference between a parallel and non-parallel sentence, read aloud the sentences below. The red sentences are examples of "bad" or faulty parallelism. The blue sentences use parallel structure.
faulty parallelism: She revels in chocolate, walking under the moonlight, and songs from the 1930s jazz period.
good parallelism: She revels in sweet chocolate eclairs, long moonlit walks, and classic jazz music.more good parallelism: She loves eating chocolate eclairs, taking moonlit walks, and singing classic jazz.
Do you hear the difference? What causes that distinction between "good" and "bad" sentences? Again, the difference appears in the pattern of grammar. If we dissect the sentence, the faulty sentence on top has a grammatical pattern that looks like this:
"She revels in . . . "
"chocolate," [Object of Preposition,]
"walking under the moonlight," [Gerund--Preposition--Definite Article--Object of Preposition]
"and songs from the 1930s jazz period." [Conjunction--Direct Object--Preposition--Definite Article--Adjective --Adjective--Object of Preposition]
It's all a jumbled mess of different parts of speech being used in different ways. On the other hand, the second sentence has a clear parallel pattern:
"She revels in"
"sweet chocolate eclairs," [Adjective--Adjective--Object]
"long moonlit walks," [Adjective--Adjective--Object]
"and classic jazz music." [Adjective--Adjective--Object]
The same pattern (adjective, adjective object) reoccurs in the same way. It is parallel in its structure, and thus musical and rhythmical to read and to hear spoken aloud. The second example is also parallel, just in a different pattern.
"She revels in"
"eating chocolate eclairs" [Gerund--Adjective--Object of Gerund]
"taking moonlit walks" [Gerund--Adjective--Object of Gerund]
"and singing classic jazz." [Gerund--Adjective--Object of Gerund]
Good writers attempt to form these good sentences. Here are some more examples culled from Karen Gordon's The Transitive Vampire:
  • faulty parallelism: I like to eat rich deserts, playing fast card-games, and riddles.
  • good parallelism: I like eating rich deserts, playing fast card-games, and solving difficult riddles.
  • more good parallelism: I like to eat rich desserts, to play fast card-games, and to solve difficult riddles.
  • more good parallelism: I like rich desserts, fast card-games, and difficult riddles.
  • bad: She is unfathomable, with a head of strawberry blond hair, and has a seductive manner.
  • good: She is an unfathomable, seductive strawberry blond.
  • bad: He is cute, wears a pinstriped suit, and has a dashing way about him.
  • good: He is cute and dashing in his pinstriped suit.
  • bad: The faun has shyness, with rough hooves, and behaves in a sylvan fashion.
  • good: The faun is shy, rough-footed, and sylvan.
  • good: The rough-hoofed faun is shy and sylvan.
Note that faulty parallelism isn't really a grammatical mistake. It's actually a stylistic problem. When editors are marking up a paper for revisions, you may note they place a pair of slanting lines in the margin--like this //. Those two slanting lines (//) indicate the editor has spotted faulty parallelism in that line of text, and the editor wants the author to fix it.

complex sentence (persuasive essay)

Fast Food? Be Careful What You Eat!

     Fast food is convenient when in a rush, but it is a bad idea to eat it too much or too often. Recently, McDonald’s featured a two dollar deal: Big Mac and small fries. Very tempting, and my son (who doesn’t normally eat at McDonald’s) bought this meal last week. What is the nutritional content of a Big Mac and fries? The hamburger contains 570 calories; almost half (280 calories) come from fat. Ten grams is saturated, the most dangerous and harmful to our heart. The Canadian Food Guide recommends that we "choose lower-fat foods more often." My son also ate a small fries! Unfortunately, they contain 210 calories, with 10 more grams of fat (1.5 grams saturated). He bought a drink as well, which adds another 150 calories (small size). Imagine he eats this dinner more than once a week! A two dollar meal contains a lot of fat. So, although fast food is very convenient (and cheap) to buy, it includes lots of fat—I think I’ll go and eat an apple, instead!

Compound complex sentence (argumentation paragraph)

Smoking
             There are many reasons why I don’t smoke. First, smoking is unhealthy. It can cause lung cancer, and it can lead to an early death. Furthermore, smoking is expensive. A pack of cigarettes costs five dollars. If I bought one pack of cigarettes every day, I would spend over $1500 each year. Lastly, cigarettes smell bad. When people smoke, you can smell the cigarettes on their clothes all day. For example, the other night, I went to a restaurant that allowed smoking. After I left, all of my clothes smelled terrible, as did my hair. If I were a smoker, I would smell that way all the time. To sum up, I don’t smoke because it is unhealthy, expensive, and unattractive.

COMPLAIN LETTER

Juanda Product Corporation
Yogyakarta


Dear Sir,
We refer to our order on 300
We have taken delivery ot the goods which arrived on PT Jaya Raya. Thank you for the promth delivery of the order. The goods are correct and in good condition except for one crate numbered 30.

When we opened crate 30, we found that it contained porcelain which we had not ardered. We presume that a mistake has been made in assimbling the order crate 30 should have contained cutlery.

As we need the articles we ordered to complete our range of cutlery. Please make anrrangements to dispatch the missing items at once.

We attach a lis of what should have been in crate 30. Please check this with our order and your copy of the invoice.

In the meantime, we are holding case 30 at your disposal. Please telex us to let us know what to do with it.

Yours Faithfully,

Retno Dwi

Kamis, 27 November 2014

EXERCISE STRUCTURE 4 (UTS)


NAME: RETNO DWI A.S
NIM: 1271212
CLASS : E12D


MID TEST STRUCTURE 4
A.     Answer the questions !
1.       The woman …. in front row is my mother

a.       who is sitting

b.      who are sitting

c.       which is sitting

d.      whom is sitting

e.      that are sitting

2.       The car …. by the driver is mine.

a.       whom is used

b.      which is used

c.       which are used

d.      who are used

e.      that are using

3.       This house …. by my husband long time ago is very ancient.

a.       has been built

b.      is building

c.       had been build

d.      built

e.      will be build

4.       Did you see my aunt …. accompany me to the market

a. which is

b. whose

c. which

d. whom

e. who

5.       Walking the street, I met a handsome man. The correct answer with underlines word is

a.       Because I was walking the street

b.      Because of I was walking the street

c.       Although I was walking the street

d.      When I was walking the street

e.      If I am walking the street

6.       Whose dress is it?

Change into noun clause!

a.       Do you know which dress is it?

b.      Do you know that dress is it?

c.       Do you know whose dress is it?

d.      Do you know who dress it is?

e.      Do you know whose dress it is?

7.       …. cooking in the kitchen,  my mother ate a bar of chocolate

a.       before

b.      after

c.       since

d.      while

e.      as though

8.       …. the trip, my brother met his friends.

a.       Continuing

b.      He continuous

c.       To be finishing

d.      Having continuou

e.      Continuou

9.       Nobody knows …. he is mine

a.       that

b.      who

c.       which is

d.      which one

e.      what

10.   I will accompany you …. your assignments have done.

a.       since

b.      because

c.       after

d.      before

e.      where

11.   No one believes ….  she can’t speak.

a.       what

b.      which one

c.       who

d.      that

e.      those


12.   Did you see the boy …. accompany me to the party

a. which is

b. whose

c. which

d. whom

e. who


13.   The man……. in front of my house is my father.

a.       stands

b.      was standing

c.       stood

d.      standing

e.      has been standing


14.   A person …. me so much is my huband

a.       love

b.      loving

c.       being loved

d.      was loving

e.      loved


15.   The guitar ….. by the guitarist is mine

a.       playing

b.      played

c.       was playing

d.      being played

e.      play



B. Answer the question bellow!

1. The bag ….  (used) is my brother’s

2. The floor …. (swept) is now clean

3. The woman …. (crying) is my mother



Change into noun clause!

4. Whose house is it?

….

5. Whose cats are those?

….